GraEm3's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[NGs' Guide to Reviewing!]

4,114.4Kb???

really man, 4megs is taking the piss, learn to compress your files, then try and tell us how to review stuff.

Potski responds:

Bad review. Read the guide again.

[( ( ( The Truth ) ) )]

I can see why your pissed about bad reviews,,,,

but after all this Is a flash site, not a skateboarding one.ppl dont come to newgrounds to see you and your friends scating, they come to see & play good flash.
I can tottally uderstand why ppl fly off the handle at you because you import movies, its mainly because of the size of them, not so much for the time it takes them to d/l it, but because of the space it takes up on the newgrounds server, coz after all the fulps pay for this shit, and im asuming that they intend it for flash artists, not for skate boarders to show off their latest reason for going to casulty.

Masta-GrassHoppa responds:

FUCK DAT! PEOPLE COME TO NEWGROUNDS TO WATCH WHATS NEW IN THE WORLD! THEY DONT COME TO WATCH "ohhh flaaaaaaaaaaash!!!!"
THEY COME TO SEE WHAT PEOPLE SUBMIT. THEY COME TO SEE WHATEVER THEY GET. THEY DONT OWN NEWGROUNDS.


NOw i just read that ::::

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not for skate boarders to show off their latest reason for going to casulty.
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What about KNOX? Showing off his clay abilities? that is not flash, or no where near a flash artist. or showing off how funny he is at dubmign?

[Hightimes at LockParty]

Nice movie,,

though i would try reduceing the file size, stream the audio if your not already doing it.oh and tell bannana lock to pass some of that shit my way.

Dragon-Lock responds:

hehe, thanks for the review.

All the audio to my knowledge is streamed, the 1 mb comes from a streamed 3 min song by Apple_Lock I tacked onto the end for the credits page. It added about 600kb to the file.

I'll let banana know your eyeing his weed :p

[Where I wanna go part 1]

Quite good,,

It could have been better at certain points , but not bad for a first.
Keep up the good work.

-GraEm3

ReQsa responds:

I think, that you just choked in something here!
1) This is not my first movie, It's my movie, nr 16 or something, and 2) Be sure to watch part 2, when I submit that!!

[Fury - Preview]

bla bla bla bla bla bla ,

did you need to have so much writing at the start , apart from that and it being a bit too dbz it was a really good cartoon , but in some parts the frame size was a bit out , the animation was fluid in most parts , but i always get a bit snide with my votes when i find out the artist is a 17 year old dbz fan , there really is no excuse for that ,IM NOT SAYING THIS FLASH IS BAD THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST ANMINE STYLE FLASH CARTOONS IV EVER SEEN but I have to dissagre when you say dbz doesnt suck , and that the story is good , what have you learnd from dbz , have you evrer seen a real persons hair turn blonde when they loose thier temper? have you ever seen some one with a monkey tail? have you ever seen some one "power up"? I'll let you answer.
you would have got a 5 but i dont like the way you say you have finished the movie , why not just submit the whole thing?
-GraEm3

AkiraToriyamaJR responds:

thanks for voting but always remember your never to old to be a fan of anythng. ok to answer your quetions. 1.i think people dont realize what akira did. if u ever watched a typical anime, the bad guy is mean. but oku is like a child with a good heart. thats why i like dbz, not s much glossy eyes hair n detailed scenary. 2.ive learned alot of tricks in animating. how to make something look like its going fast. 3.when you asked the 3 questions to me, ask yourself have you eve seen a person die from wathcing a tape ( the ring ) have you ever head of a fifth element power ( the fifth element ) do you see walkng and talking animals ( cartoons and space jam ) Think about it. its just a cartoon ,fictional, and you make it like it has to be real. thats the beauty of animations. make your imagination come tru. Last,my move is 43.5MB thats way over the limit because of sounds and music. i wont trim them because it makes the movie whack. i am done with it but im taking a break now. hope i answered your questions

[Vegeta's Common Sense]

WTF?

I'm sick of this shit , 4 megs , do you realise how big that is , it wouldnt bother me that much if it was all your own work , but an imported video , come on , your only wasteing space , I'll take it that you dont read the front page , because if you did you would know that ng is needing to get more bandwith, and do you know why that is , people like you that have got the sort of atitude like "oh im a lazy prick , i know , i'll import some pictures and a video because im too stupid to try and make a cartoon or game" and to make that worse your 18 , what sad , lazy type of indaviduall gets to 18 and still watches kids cartoons like dbz and cant even spend time to learn how to optimise flash, for fuck sake, try and learn , and dont bother responding with "im new to flash , i only wanted to have a cartoon on ng" becuase i dont care if you are new to flash , your wasteing ng's bandwith with movies that you only done about 5% of the work in , if that. Let me give you some advice , do your own work , make a cartoon from scratch , if your shit at drawing keep at it , youll get better, learn how to optimse your flash , go into publish settings then find the sound bit , its not that hard , and finnaly have more than one layer of animation , becuase that is is the first thing most reveiwrs look for , if youv only got one layer , your a noob or your a very very good frame by frame animator , i hope you took the time to read this , because i took the time to watch your waste of bandwith , oh and one more tip ,never EVER do anything like this again, i will be looking out for any more submitions of yours and if i see another like this and its in the bellow 100 votes bit its getting put up on the blam club website.
-GraEm3

GokuLV500 responds:

yes i read it

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You hate blue clock , then i hate you

you say you hate blue clock ,why , its not asif you have better flash skills than him, shit , you dont even have flash skils , frame action > stop
button action > play , wow thats really complex , thats 10 times better than blue clocks random clock appearence in the void 2 , not.I think you should consider how crap you are before you critisise others , and dont bother telling me to look at my flash , because mine might be crap , but at least my work is my work and not somebody eles edited photos , and to top it off, 761k for all that crap , if i want funny pictures i'll go to steak and cheese , if i want a rip off i'll watch a dreamskape cartoon, but yor flash has no use at all , well , actully , you could use it as a bad example.What makes this even better is that some of the bottons didnt work, how crap can you be , is it posible to make a crapper flash than this , dont bother saying that i abuseive and im picking on your poxy level 3 flash for no reason , im doing it because
a)You dissed blue clock's The void II
b)I'll quote this one-"look at my movies for a bit of a titter. review them, i like the feedback."
Hows this for feedback LEARN HOW TO TWEEN YO SICK SONOFABEETCH, in the words of the biggest pussy in the world (dreamskape) "do me a favour , never make flash again"
-GraEm3

mr-jamaica responds:

i know how to fucking tween, and ill have you know my herbs made me fuck up those buttons.and i did watch your movies, and you arent in any position to criticise anyone mate. i hate blue clock, shawn hollern, fu clock, strawberry clock, and all the other badly named clocks.
ps. try not to call yourself a name shared by a gay talkshow host in the future.

[unlikely situation]

no, no ,no ,no, no ,no ,no

Come on man , I'v seen all this shit before, the head bobing was from a cartoon that was taking thi piss outa the pot:harmless cartoons and iv seen the guy doing the animal in umpteen clock movies, If you had used the 2pac (the origonal) version of the song i would have gave you a 7 for sound , but the jay - z version is a rip off and is aimed at the pop audience , even if this had a background i would consider giving it a 3 , I can see you put some work into the first part , but im guessing that you lost interest and just put all of your other faild attepts at flash into one file , made there heads move , and submitted this, I know my flash needs to be improoved , but i would never submit anything like this.
-GraEm3

chinees responds:

so its been 10 years and im totally stoned reading this review, LMFOA you had me spot on xD

[5 Things I Hate About C-S]

no

I saw this the last time you submited it.

SomeOtherGuy responds:

sorry... never submitted it.. maybe one like it was wut u saw

[Genocide Inc. Shorts Ep 2]

wtf?

whats that preloader about, are you trying to give people seizeurs (sorry my spellings shit).The drawings in this were good but I could see that you had got lazy in some parts , like the tnt ending (she didnt even push the lever down , it jus magicly done it by itself)But your file size made up for the lazy bits, considering there was about three or four songs it it 1.5 megs isnt to bad,I'll give you a 3, oh and what hapend to that breakin game you were making?

Blaklyon responds:

...I am deeply hurt by you GraEm3! You are a level 11 NG user with a security guard rank! I thought the users with a higher level would have a eye for art talant, originality, style, and, quality of a flash animation! Guess not! shame on you! you're not going to even give me points or, kudos for, overall look of, the animation? you saw one thing that I missed and, you give my animation a overall of 2 for THAT! and, as for the game Breakin it will be completed as soon as I find some action scripters willing to help me out or, learn it myself. but once it is complete I don't know if its a good Idea for you to play it because, I might miss one thing and you will BLAM it because of that! sorry I am not a professional animator like you! Wait.....what animations have you done?.....Oh thats right.....NONE! you silly ass Flash light cop! (security guard!)